You’re Honour
I'm here today stating the incident that my daughter was involved in. I'm her mother. Dawn Marie is my fourteen year old daughter that committed suicide because of three girls who bullied her. One week from today my daughter committed suicide. My son found her in her closet. And she hanged herself in her closet with the dog leash. Your Honour it was a fine day when my daughter hanged herself. Well it was a fine day till then. When my daughter hanged herself she left a note and the note said " mom I'm being bullied by three girls and there is no way out for me".
Your Honour I don't know what these girls all said. I know they called her names and bullied her but they probably did other things to her that she never told me. I loved my daughter very much and to make it worse my son found her and not me. My son feels very sad and lonely now with not having a older sister by his side every day. I have been feeling terrible a lot and i feel very lonely. I know i have a son at home but not having my older daughter that always was happy never I down unless something bad happen to her. But i guess this must have brought her down a lot.
Your Honour I think the right punishment for her should be jail and probation. The reason for that is in jail they have to smarten up or they will get beat. They need to stop being bullies or they will get bullied there. At jail I think she will learn her lesson easier than if she just had to have things taken away from her and do some work. Because in life that's what you are going to have to do because when you get older you are going to work in an everyday life. See if you just get things taken away from you some people don't care because they know they will get them back but see if you go to jail you will have to learn your lesson there and not just get everything you want.
Your Honour that is the one thing I ask you to do. And that is to put them in jail. If you don't put her in jail I would love to know why. I think all these girls need it because they are not learning anything. I know I forgave them but just me saying it is fine doesn’t mean it is. Right then I thought it wasn't totally there fault but now I know it is now. If you don't put these girls in jail i don't know if they will learn anything. These girls need prison to learn their lesson. Because the punishments they are supposed to get will not teach them anything. Your Honour I told you what I want not just to make me happy but so these girls will learn their lesson so I hope you will take my word.
Nice job Ryan. You displayed a lot of empathy on this assignment. Be sure to only hit tab once to begin a new paragraph and aldo hit enter once between paragraphs. Keep working on your editing.
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